Homework

Many students think that homework is not necessary, and that teachers don't need to give any. The students think that homework needs to be done only in the classroom not at home.
For example, an eleven year old student from the USA wrote an essay against homework.
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Students sometimes are not concentrated during the lesson or speak and laugh with their friends. Homework exist exactly for these students. when someone  needs to do homework’s he needs to go over the material and  this way he learns the material that he missed during the lesson.
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Unfortunately, most students are not aware of the significances of homework. When you do the homework you understand the material better and you get more experience with the material. when the test comes the chance that you will get a high grade is higher.
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In conclusion, homework  is necessary and important. Preparing homework not takes a lot of time but helps a lot, you understand better the material and remember it for a longer time.

Good work, but too many grammar mistakes. You tend to use the present progressive where the present simple is required. Pay attention to that and correct your work.

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Daphna.