Application for studies

12,Shenkar street
Holon
29, April 2010

Harvard University
65 Pine street ,Cambridge
Massachusetts


Dear Sir/Madam,

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I am 23 years old I have studied veterinary medicine for two years now. I heard that your university is offering excellent biology and chemistry courses that I am interested in. I am writing to you because I would like to apply for admission to your school for completing my degree in veterinary medicine.
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I am interested in the Biology and Chemistry courses because I need them to complete my degree in veterinary medicine, but also because I have had always an interest in studying those subjects. Biology and chemistry were my meager(sp.) subjects in high school and I want to continue studying the(ww.) subjects in much serious frame like university(phr.) .
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In addition to my hopes to finish my veterinary studies, I also love the idea of studying in Harvard. Since I was a little girl, I have always dreamed to study in Harvard. I love the environment in Cambridge and I have been thinking about studying abroad for a long time.
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I would be grateful if you could send me more information about the courses, the total cost of the courses and the residence choices that exist in Harvard.

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Thank you for your assistance.

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I look forward to hearing from you.
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Truly yours,
Anna Smith

(85)

Daphna

A trip to the USA

88 Pine Street
Holon
April 4, 2010

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"See the World"
88, First avenue
New York, NY

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am twenty-three years old and I have just completed my military service. I am writing to you because I am interested to go on a trip in the USA and I would like to know more about the activities that your travel agency is offering. Also, I would like to know what is the age grope that are going to(phr.) this trip and which states the trip includes.
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I am interested in a trip that includes extreme sports like climbing, and tours in the popular sites, Niagara Falls, Navy Pier, and museums. Also, I would like to know if the trip offers any night life, such as, clubs casinos.
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I would like to know in which hotels the group is going to stay.In addition, I need information about the total cost of the trip to the USA, the number of people is in the group. I would be thankful if you send me more specific details about the trip's schedule.
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Finally, I hope that you reply as soon as you can and answer all my questions. I am looking forward to the trip.

Sincerely yours,
Mary Smith

(80)

Daphna

Radio show

88 Pine Street
Holon
April 4, 2010

Manager
Holon's local radio station
10 sokolove Street
Holon

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am sixteenth years old, I have heard about your plans to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers on ours local radio station. I am writing to you because I want to suggest you (unnecessary) an idea for the radio programs that. in my opinion. will interest teenagers (new sentence) which(ww. - The program) will discuss how to mange right the time.

On this radio show, teenagers will be able to ask how to mange their time right, so they have the time to do homework, to learn(ww.) to(ww.) exams and to rest from the day in school. They will get advices from other listeners, that are in(unnecessary) their age or they have been past(phr.) the same problem. Also, from time to time will come an expert(wo.) that can help the listeners.

In my opinion, this subject is important because many students do not know how to mange(sp.) their time right so they choose to not(wo.) do homework or not learn(ww.) all the material to(ww.) the exam and that influence(gr.) their grades . Many students are exhausted from going to school and dealing(with) all the problems that are connected to learning and searching the way that will make these experiences much easier.

To conclude, I think that it is the most suitable time for this subject because the period of the bagrut exams are(gr.) starting and this show will help many teenagers to pass(ww.) this period (successfully/more easily). Therefore, I believe that such a program will be very useful for them. I would like to thank you for considering my suggestion.

Yours sincerely,

Mary Poppins

(78)

Daphna