Radio show

88 Pine Street
Holon
April 4, 2010

Manager
Holon's local radio station
10 sokolove Street
Holon

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am sixteenth years old, I have heard about your plans to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers on ours local radio station. I am writing to you because I want to suggest you (unnecessary) an idea for the radio programs that. in my opinion. will interest teenagers (new sentence) which(ww. - The program) will discuss how to mange right the time.

On this radio show, teenagers will be able to ask how to mange their time right, so they have the time to do homework, to learn(ww.) to(ww.) exams and to rest from the day in school. They will get advices from other listeners, that are in(unnecessary) their age or they have been past(phr.) the same problem. Also, from time to time will come an expert(wo.) that can help the listeners.

In my opinion, this subject is important because many students do not know how to mange(sp.) their time right so they choose to not(wo.) do homework or not learn(ww.) all the material to(ww.) the exam and that influence(gr.) their grades . Many students are exhausted from going to school and dealing(with) all the problems that are connected to learning and searching the way that will make these experiences much easier.

To conclude, I think that it is the most suitable time for this subject because the period of the bagrut exams are(gr.) starting and this show will help many teenagers to pass(ww.) this period (successfully/more easily). Therefore, I believe that such a program will be very useful for them. I would like to thank you for considering my suggestion.

Yours sincerely,

Mary Poppins

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Daphna