In the lest(sp.+ww.) years the Internet has took(gr.) a big part in our lives. We communicate through the Internet,searching(gr.) (for) information and working(gr.) in(ww.) the Internet. The Internet has a positive side but a negative to.(phr.)

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On the one hand, the Internet gives us the opportunity to communicate with people from different places in the world. We can communicate with relatives and friends that is(gr.+ww.) in different places in the world through a web camera or through a microphone on line. Also, in our spare time we can play games on line or read different articles.

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On the other hand, the Internet prevents people from meeting each other face to face, to see ache(sp.) other's face expressions and the look in their eyes when they talk with you . Also(try a different connector this time) the many hours that we spend in front of the computer are causing(gr.) us to not go outside or exercise(phr.). (A new sentence) because of that(phr. - As a result,) in this(ww.) days many people have health problems.(You should mention, in short, what kind of problems, like being overweight and out of shape)

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In conclusion, the Internet affected(gr.) on our lives in many aspects.In my opinion, there has to be a balance between the time that we spend in front of the computer and the time that we spend outside or with people.

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Daphna